Tuesday, March 20, 2007

Breathing

Sighing gentle wind
Resting quiet cloud in sky
Breathing you and I
*
Gentle wind sighing
Quiet cloud resting in sky
You and I breathing
*
Gentle sighing wind
In quiet sky resting cloud
I ... you ... and breathing
*
Wind sighing gentle
Sky quiet in resting cloud
And I breathing you.
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6 Comments:

Blogger Regina Clare Jane said...

Brilliant, Elspeth- simply brilliant...

7:44 AM  
Blogger jem said...

Fun and clever. A little shift of words a lot of shift of meaning.

8:56 AM  
Blogger Roswila said...

Wonderful innovative series. The last one is particularly touching.

11:37 AM  
Blogger Tammy said...

This was wonderful and creative. That last one was my favorite.

11:49 AM  
Anonymous Kelly said...

Beautiful. Just reading it made me aware of my breathing and calmed me down.

3:44 PM  
Blogger Star said...

Such a calming progression as you focus on the breathing.

4:56 PM  

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