Breathing
Sighing gentle wind
Resting quiet cloud in sky
Breathing you and I
*
Gentle wind sighing
Quiet cloud resting in sky
You and I breathing
*
Gentle sighing wind
In quiet sky resting cloud
I ... you ... and breathing
*
Wind sighing gentle
Sky quiet in resting cloud
And I breathing you.
*
(This week's One Deep Breath: Breathing)
Labels: one deep breath, poems
posted by Elspeth at Tuesday, March 20, 2007
6 Comments:
Brilliant, Elspeth- simply brilliant...
Fun and clever. A little shift of words a lot of shift of meaning.
Wonderful innovative series. The last one is particularly touching.
This was wonderful and creative. That last one was my favorite.
Beautiful. Just reading it made me aware of my breathing and calmed me down.
Such a calming progression as you focus on the breathing.
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