Saturday, May 05, 2007

Ocean

This week's Sunday Scribblings prompt is 'Ocean'

(Canada Chronicles continued)

Roaring subway.
Trains roll in,
Roll out again.
Rush hour tides ebb and flow.
No footprints left on
Sand-coloured sidewalks.
Clouds reflect in
Blue glass skyscrapers.
And we are driftwood.

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5 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think you are a poet. C

7:41 PM  
Blogger angel said...

i like! a different kind of ocean!

5:28 AM  
Blogger gautami tripathy said...

Ocean of life! Like this.

6:45 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

driftwood in the city's ocean - glad my city isn't that big.

6:48 AM  
Blogger Regina Clare Jane said...

Awesome, Elspeth! I love the analogy!

4:59 PM  

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